Valkyrie's Child

Hi everyone, this is one of the stories that I wrote for a story-writing competition. If this is accepted, it may be chosen for full novel adaptation. I greatly appreciate suggestions, comments and for those who can help fix my grammar, I offer my thanks in advance. Please don't remove the original if you wish to edit it, just copy paste under the paragraphs and fix it there.

As for why I'm using Google Drive, it's because GD is not indexed. I don't want them to claim that this has been published before just because they can google it. I would also appreciate that you not share this until half a year later.

Your comments, feedbacks and help is much appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Just FYI, I'm planning on delivering this on the 28th of March.


Synopsis: My name was Takagawa Ayumu. I was a man's man. In my school, there was nobody stronger than me. I was the leader, people looked up to me. One day I saved a grandma from a bunch of delinquents and was stabbed instead. When I realized it, I was swimming in a pool of slime and had turned into a girl. At least I get to eat gyudon in alien worlds.

Genre: Gender-bender, sci-fi, space battles, comedy

Link to Google Drive

p/s: I'll be back to FSL and The Rock after I've finished two other short stories due shortly. Both of which I'll also share here in my blog through GD.